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The Making of Tervari => Pokemon and Pokedex => Propositions => Topic started by: Empty Sun on October 22, 2013, 09:06:31 pm

Title: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 22, 2013, 09:06:31 pm
All reviews, development, info and stuff for Contyphlos goes here

so...

(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/294/5/d/blind_by_emptypathofthesun-d6rcb2p.png)
Name: Contyphlos (contamination + typhlos which means "blind)

Type: poison

Stats:
HP:80
ATK:115
DEF:75
SPATK:78
SPDEF:75
SPD:95
BST:518 (stat total of a Gallade)

Ability: Unaware/Quick Feet/DWPoison Touch

Species: Blind Pokemon

Description: Although blind, it is quite capable. It only uses the poison it secretes from its claws for self defense.

Gender rate: 50/50

Height: 4' 4"

Weight: 89 lbs

Concept: Based off of a rogue and the best senses other than sight (ie hearing and touch)

Egg Group: Human-like
Hatch cycle: 21 cycles (5355 steps)

MOVES:
by leveling:
---: Scratch
---: Growl
lv6: Poison Sting
lv10: Focus Energy
lv15: Metal Claw
lv19: Quick Attack
lv24: Revenge
lv28: Acupressure
lv33: Poison Jab
lv39: Slash
lv44: Detect
lv48: Cross Poison
lv55: Perish Song
lv59: Psycho Cut
lv64: Venoshock

by TM/HM:
Hone Claws
Toxic
Dragon Claw
Roar
Bulk Up
Hidden Power
Frustration
Return
Smack Down
Sludge Bomb
Rest
Thief
False Swipe
Acrobatics
Embargo
Shadow Claw
Payback
Retaliate
Giga Impact
Hyper Beam
Swords Dance
Psych Up
X-Scissor
Sleep Talk
U-turn
Rock Smash
Cut
Strength

Egg moves:
Night Slash
Ice Punch
Fire Punch
ThunderPunch
Drain Punch

EDIT: yes eye am done c:
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Snaquaza on October 22, 2013, 10:59:12 pm
I'd personally think this is a great idea for a "hindered mon" like Slaking, Regigigas or Archeops, this one would mostly be comparable to Archeops, I think it'd be interesting to have this thing have like 575 BST or so, but has an ability that makes all moves miss 75% of the time?

What do you guys think of this idea for this Pokemon, I think it'd make sense and that it would be nice to have an "hindered" mon in our game
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 12:20:32 am
Meh then again we already got our 16 Pokemon above 499 BST. Plus I wouldnt do 75% of the time, I would go with 70% less than the move your usings regular accuracy, and I dont think Empty Sun would like a hindering mon. So if thats the case Ill propose a hindering mon :)
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 23, 2013, 03:05:07 am
@cofagrigus and @Snaquaza the whole "hindered mon" thing sounds really great, but I don't have much free time and it was pretty hard looking up abilities that would apply to blind pokemon (Unaware because I can't see any of your prettys yo) so it would be pretty tricky intergrating failness into Contyphlos's abilities.
I meant it to be like a "mai ears are mai eyes" kind of guy, if you know what I'm sayin' *coughtophblindbanditcough*
Also, I want reviews on its design. The picture presented is a base color/shape final draft of super-hard work and design and planning and yadda yadda and time and having my services critically analyze it or something. I want to know if the design is good, needs improving or should be drastically changed (please no) so that I can improve.
Also one more thing I want to make clear:
This is meant to mess around with type association as mono poison is commonly given buffness as its stats. A friend brought that up and I was like "whoa wouldn't it be fun if we had a mono poison speedy beast thing"
So yeah
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 03:31:29 am
Oh another thing this needs a prevo or its rejected anyway and btw it was just a suggestion, so I did the honors of making a hindered Viper Pokemon :)
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 23, 2013, 03:49:33 am
@cofagragus thanks c:

also a per evo? argghhghghghh I'm having trouble enough as it is. I'll slap on a pre evo later if it REALLY needs it
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 04:15:11 am
Got it but Im pretty sure it NEEDS a prevo at this point since my Psyltergeist had trouble getting accepted without a prevo :/
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 06:02:08 am
Also this Pokemon seems poison/psychic type if its going to have Psycho Cut ._.

anyways how does it compare to my mon?
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Naminé on October 23, 2013, 08:55:27 pm
Positive
Finally a FINISHED mon with all moves so a positive from me!
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 11:28:55 pm
god Namine you dont have to be so harsh when comparing how you commented on my mon :(
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Snaquaza on October 23, 2013, 11:31:22 pm
I'd really expect less HP on this tbh, other stats seem fine
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 23, 2013, 11:55:37 pm
Hmm yeah less HP and a bit more Defense (it looks like it has an armored helmet), and Ill give it a positive
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 24, 2013, 04:31:36 am
Yeah I guess more defense should be in order
I'll fix that eheh
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 27, 2013, 04:27:00 am
I scanned some doodles for reference.
Th left side is kind of empty bcause I used paper with holes eheh
https://mail-attachment.googleusercontent.com/attachment/u/0/?ui=2&ik=92107afb46&view=att&th=141f1b2ce98b6eec&attid=0.1&disp=inline&safe=1&zw&saduie=AG9B_P8VL2NqJnlH7L8uHhb1pU_B&sadet=1382844279919&sads=K1gANMzMRuDFqaEmJLl10pebl_s
yayyy
there are also some random scribbles pay no heed
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 30, 2013, 07:37:40 pm
ah **** i just realized i linked to my gmail ill get that fixed

..okay all everything can be found through this thread and fixed
http://letsmakeagametogether.createaforum.com/propositions/idea-sketches-(free-to-take)/
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: cofagragus on October 30, 2013, 11:15:55 pm
POSITIVE >; ) but i think it should be psychic (with Psychic slots still open) and it can use telepathy to find its foes as well as its other senses.
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on October 31, 2013, 12:12:08 am
While it does sound very applicable and even better, I want to stick to the whole mono poison eheh
and adding a type would mean I'd have to add more moves which takes time

(Also the reason it has psycho cut etc. is because it is a slash move user like absol lol)
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Hollymon Returns on November 01, 2013, 10:43:22 am
Hey I suggest giving it another name because
1. It is spelt oddly
2. It sounds like candyfloss
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on November 02, 2013, 10:15:01 pm
@Hollymon Returns ??????
How is it spelled "oddly" ?????
and it does sound a bit like "candy floss" I never noticed
I couldn't find any better names for "poison + blind" so I had to break out my latin/greek root book
I honestly can't think of a better name



ALSO I fixed everything everyone wanted fixed I should have three Positives by now  :/
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Empty Sun on November 05, 2013, 08:26:33 pm
I NEED ONE MORE POSITIVE TO BE ACCEPTED SOMEONE PLEASE
I'm sorry if I scalded your ears
Title: Re: Contyphlos
Post by: Shadow on November 05, 2013, 10:22:07 pm
I LOVE this idea. So awesome. Blind Pokémon are cool in design, and this one is just that.

*Shadow throws the last Positive at Empty Sun.*